User:Jjm2121/Burying beetle/Mbutler2001 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jjm2121


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Jjm2121/Burying_beetle&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template&veaction=edit&redirect=no
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Burying beetle

Evaluate the drafted changes
Jacqueline, this is great start to your article layout. It is very interesting that you are adding a second on infanticide, and specifically splitting this into parental and intruder infanticides. While the headers are great, you need to add information to these sections. You do have four sources which look great and I am sure it is probably difficult to find research on such a specific topic of burying beetles. As we move forward and add sources, you may want to look for more recent research/sources on your topic. Also, looking at the main article, I believe this new addition will fit well after the reproduction section.