User:Jjt010/Wildlife of Iraq/EGS009 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jjt010


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jjt010/Wildlife_of_Iraq?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jjt010/Wildlife_of_Iraq?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
There is no edits of the lead section. Could add some more details about the environment they live in and possibly human affects on the wildlife. The content added is relevant but could add more information other than a list of animals. A few pictures would be a nice touch in this type of article. You could add how some of the animals interact with the environment or their niche.