User:Jjw21/Dog skin disorders/Jra004 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jjw21


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jjw21/Dog skin disorders


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your title is pretty good. I am wondering if maybe it is too vague. I agree with what you are adding to the article, but I think quite a bit more could be added. Some ideas I thought of were treatments, how severe can it get, what is the worst possible case. I think there would need to be more added to critique the structure and organization, but so far I think it sounds good!