User:Jkb44/Legacy pollution/Loon-erMoth Peer Review

General info
Aviternity, Zythryial, and Jkb44
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Legacy pollution
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Legacy pollution

Evaluate the drafted changes
Very thorough lead section, first paragraph has two separate sentences listing examples of notable legacy pollutants. I like the structure used in the introduction, covering what it is, where it comes from, and the kind of impact it has.

Body text is well organized and sectioned based on types of pollutants, the causes of the pollution, the social impacts, and more. Could possibly expand the section on international policy, or maybe place that with the information about PCBs.

Lots of reliable references provided from a variety of scientific papers and news articles.