User:Jkk12348966543/Alaskan Malamute/Lmccale7 Peer Review

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The lead does not include and introductory sentence that concisely describes the articles topic. It lacks clear overview of the Alaskan Malamute breed and its significance.

There isn't a brief description of the articles major section in the lead.

The lead contains information not present in the article,such as the roles Alaskan Malamutes play as sled dogs, family pets and participants in various activities like weight pulling and animal therapy programs.

The lead is somewhat detailed but lacks a clear structure and overview of the articles content.

The added content is relevant to the topic of Alaskan Malamutes. It appears to be up to date as it discusses their current roles and behaviors.

There isn't significant missing content, but the lead could benefit from mentioning other sections of the article.

The article doesn't directly address Wikipedia's equity gaps or historically underrepresented populations or topics related to the Alaskan Malamute.

In terms of tone and balance the content added maintains a neutral tone.

There are no apparent claims heavily biased towards a particular position. Different viewpoints regarding the roles and characteristics of Alaskan Malamutes are not represented.

The content doesn't attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or another; it primarily provides factual information about the breed.

Guiding questions: Is all the new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? All the new content is in fact backed up by a reliable secondary source.

The content accurately reflect what the cited sources say. The sources are thorough and reflect the available literature on the topic. The sources are also current.

They do not include historically marginalized individuals where possible

I think there are better sources available. This article for example had some great information in regards to the topic.[Alaskan Malamute- Dog time] https://dogtime.com/dog-breeds/alaskan-malamute This link provides information about Alaskan Malamutes from a different source, Dog time, which offer a unique perspective and more details compared to the Wikipedia page.