User:Jkramerr/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Sexuality in music videos

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

I chose to evaluate this article because I believe this topic of sexuality in music videos is an important topic that is very relevant to our culture today and remains a staple in our generations media. Because I believe this article is important to our generations media I chose to evaluate this article because it does not meet the Wikipedia standards and has multiple issues that need to be fixed.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

Evaluating the article: Sexuality in Music Videos


 * The lead section of the article "Sexuality in Music Videos" is very weak and need a lot of improvement as it only consists of one sentence before getting into the content of the article. Having this weak lead section is a major disadvantage as readers are not able to obtain a brief description of the article and its major sections. Instead it just contains a short sentence describing the bare minimum of the article.
 * The content of the article "Sexuality in Music Videos" is relevant to the topic, however, it has not been updated recently so it is missing current information about recent music videos relating to this topic. Because this article deals with current media and all of its niche subcultures there are some Wikipedia equity gaps as every single artist and music video does not have a thorough Wikipedia pages.