User:Jktmiami/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Cradle of Coaches

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
This article interested me for its obvious ties to Miami University as well as the fact that I have been fortunate enough to meet a few of the men on the list.

Evaluate the Article

The article does a good job of listing the men who have been identified as members of the "Cradle of Coaches." While it does list the names and the years that they were associated with Miami University, I found it lacking in listing their accomplishments. For instance, Weed Ewbank won a Super Bowl with the Jets and two NFL Championships with the Colts. John Harbaugh and Sean McVay have each coached Super Bowl Champions. I feel like information is notable enough to be mentioned. Along with the National Championships and accomplishments of coaches like Bo Schembechler and Ara Parseghian. This page does have some decent links at the bottom of the page, but again, there is room for growth.