User:Jkydrovo/Censorship in North Korea/Briannamac Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jkydrovo, Ajkendall100559, Brookebaarber, Hparks2024, Mattcvogel, Lmhealy


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Censorship in North Korea


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
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This article has good structure to it but I feel like the group can expand on the radio/TV, journalism, and internet policy sections. There is a lot of new information that has come out about North Korea, and I think the article has a good foundation of information. I also think that the intro can be elaborated on. I also think that there could be a section on propaganda and how that has an impact on the media in the country.