User:Jkydrovo/Censorship in North Korea/Farrahmarie Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jkydrovo, Ajkendall100559, Brookebaarber, Hparks2024, Mattcvogel, Lmhealy, Marina yasuna


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jkydrovo/Censorship_in_North_Korea?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Censorship in North Korea

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The framework is off to a good start. The lead of defining censorship is definitely essential in introducing the topic happening in North Korea. The article already has a decent amount of information but the fact that you want to go more in depth will help the readers better understand. Censorship within politics and online would be a great addition because there are current issues in America dealing with censorship in books, I can't even imagine what the censorship is like in North Korea.