User:Jkydrovo/Censorship in North Korea/Morganbloom Peer Review

General info

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Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

- "North Korea is ranked at the bottom of Reporters Without Borders' annual Press Freedom Index," - Maybe add an explanation to what the press freedom index is to give the source more context.

- Take out "born an ordinary man" to keep it objective

- In the "1946–present: The Korean Central News Agency" section, try and make the second paragraph flow a bit better. Right now it is very choppy.

- The "2004–2008: Cell phone ban" section could be moved to the "Radio and television censorship" section.

- Move the part where you talk about the upper-class citizens having internet access to the last section, "Internet Policies".