User:Jlbettis/Afro-Mexicans/Harelia Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jlbettis


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jlbettis/Afro-Mexicans?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Afro-Mexicans

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Hi! I really liked the contribution that you made regarding the idea of the “Cosmic race”. I was a bit confused on where you would include this section. Would it go after the section about the expansion of slavery and before the section titled Demography? I think that it would be helpful to add more detail about the impact of this ideology. Was it received well and included in the general understanding of the future, or did this ideology not spread very far? I am glad that you chose this topic, since it is quite evident that a huge portion of history is missing on this page!