User:Jlsenn/Coenobita cavipes/Jacksondenny82 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Jlsenn)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jlsenn/Coenobita_cavipes?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

Definately add more to lead but probaby no more than a paragraph.

Content

I would probaby rework the first sentence in the ecology section so it is not a run on.

The second sentence I would probaby use the common name for the crab so it reads smoother.

Possibly add in info about range and where it is found specifically, as well as more habitat details.

You could label the Food section as diet.

Could bring in a section about life stages/reproduction.

Tone

Good so far.

Sources

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