User:Jluquir/Cell fusion/AJGatch Peer Review

General info
Jluquir
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Cell fusion:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cell fusion

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead -

It does not look like the lead has been much updated to reflect the added sections, but I do not think it is necessary. The lead, as it is currently, adequately describes cell fusion in not too much but not too little detail. The lead does not include a description of the various sections of the article, but I am not used to seeing this in Wikipedia article leads.

Content -

The content added serves as a nice complement to the article. It is good to have sections on plant cells and cancer progression as these are two areas where cell fusion is important. I think these sections could use a bit more volume and could also benefit from more references, as there is currently only one for each sections. Adding images to the sections would also be beneficial.

Sources and references -

As mentioned above, I think that the article could benefit from more references so that the information is well researched and cross-checked by a variety of up-to-date sources. More references will also come naturally if more content is added.

Organization -

I do think that the article is concise and easy to read. The student has made several edits deleting unnecessary language, which is helpful for readability.

Images and media -

The article features a couple images, but I think that the article could be greatly improved by the addition of new images and media to enhance reader understanding. I also think that the diagram demonstrating cell fusion should be modified perhaps with a shorter description (with this information possibly moved to the body text) so that it is not spanning multiple article sections, which makes it kind of confusing.