User:Jluquir/Cell fusion/Lbcobb Peer Review

General info
Jluquir
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Cell fusion
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Cell fusion

Evaluate the drafted changes
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The overall content added to this particular article has added to its strength and delivery of information. The lead includes introductory sentences that briefly describe the role of cell fusion, its occurrences, and its impact within different cells. The article is organized into several subheadings, providing the history, types of cell fusion, methods of use, and its application within the real world; however, some of these sub-headings could potentially be reworded in order to better detail what information is being presented about cell fusion. For example, instead of writing "two types" as a subheading, potentially rewording it to say "Types of Cell Fusion" could be beneficial for a person potentially trying to understand the purpose of this article. Additionally, potentially deleting the subheading about microorganisms and incorporating it into other subheadings might add to the strength of the article, as the information provided about microorganisms at the end disrupts its organization. However, the content added is relevant, especially in terms of its application in human therapy and its role in cancer progression. There are several references and many secondary sources that have been incorporated and utilized throughout the article. Sources are relevant, and corresponding links within the article are working; cross-links are also included and enhance the comprehension of the article. To additionally back up information presented within the article, citations could potentially be referenced after more sentences within the article. Overall, this article is very thorough and provides a detailed analysis of cell fusion and its role from both a molecular and human standpoint.