User:Jlwatts98/Environmental sex determination/Esf55 Peer Review

Peer review
This article is very well written and also well organized. It was very easy to follow and I feel that you provided a ton of useful information from relevant sources. You also did a great job in linking articles to words/phrases that may need further clarification to those who may not know what those are. So great job!

One of the things I wanted to comment is in regards to the “Taxonomic Range” section. You have a lot of information about vertebrates, ferns, mosses, and angiosperms. However, there is little information about annelids and crustaceans. Since there is only one sentence about annelids, would it be worth including it at all? I have the same thought about the first sentence in the Vertebrates section (“The sex of alligators is determined by nest temperature”). Both are very interesting facts but they seem like just filler sections.

I also think it might be useful to mention in the introduction how both plants and animals experience environmental sex determination, since you talk about both in the “Taxonomic Range”. While you do link information with “genotypic sex determination” and “sequential hermaphroditism”, I think it might be useful even just to add something as simple as “Both plants and animals experience ESD” (or something along those lines) may help the reader understand the scope of the topic. Overall, awesome job with the article!