User:Jlynn03/Haemophilus ducreyi/CoffeeShopFantasy Peer Review

General info
Jlynn03
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jlynn03/Haemophilus_ducreyi?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Haemophilus ducreyi

Evaluate the drafted changes
Adding information regarding the gram +/- of the bacteria is useful because the wikipedia discusses the gram stain of the microbe.

Descriptions of the bacteria are useful and beneficial

Explaining what isn't known about a bacteria "there is very limited research on the ... " doesn't seem very common in wikipedia's style.. Perhaps simply saying what is known and leaving out that we don't know a lot? Not sure. look into it

Work on phrasing/grammar of "Treatments" section before publishing

Good amount of sources!

it might be good to include where the bacteria was first found.