User:Jlynn03/Haemophilus ducreyi/Reejisoo Peer Review

General info
Msk82893, Dentbassist, Ae38798, Atnjjk7
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jlynn03/Haemophilus ducreyi
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Haemophilus ducreyi
 * Haemophilus ducreyi

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * I liked how you incorporated more sources along with the new information. It enriches the content with reliable references and improving the article's credibility.
 * I also liked how you introduced new sections in your sandbox draft, as It expand the content and make the article more informative.
 * It might be beneficial to consider replacing the current image (probably with a more zoomed-in and focused picture of Haemophilus ducryl). This would provide a clearer representation of the bacterium's specific characteristics and help readers better understand its morphology.


 * I think that it would be more suitable to relocate the information regarding the first discovery of Haemophilus ducreyl from the 'Metabolism' section to the 'Background' or an introductory section. Placing this historical content in the Background section will provide more clear flow to the article.