User:Jlynn03/Thiomargarita namibiensis/Brimibo2 Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
A good amount of detail was added about Sulfur oxidation being the energy source for T. namibiensis. It was unclear as to where this information would be added into the article, so I would just make that more clear. The article already seems to have a lot of information, so I would look into other articles that might create new sections.