User:Jlynn03/Thiomargarita namibiensis/GoldenRetriever18 Peer Review

General info
Jlynn03, Kasanchez, Writtenwall, Eleoni2002
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jlynn03/Thiomargarita_namibiensis?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Thiomargarita namibiensis

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * It looks like the information that you added to your Sandbox comes from a reliable source.
 * I am confused where this information is supposed to go in the main article because it is not specified.
 * The information is presented in a clear and concise manner.
 * It may be helpful to organize your Sandbox, categorizing information.
 * It's good that you added your plan into your Sandbox so that everyone is on the same page.