User:Jlynn03/Thiomargarita namibiensis/Hb56030 Peer Review

General info
Eleoni2002, Writtenwall, Kasanchez, Jlynn03
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jlynn03/Thiomargarita_namibiensis?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * The information provided are relevant, however, it could be better structured
 * I think the editing plan is great, I would definitely recommend adding more sources