User:Jmacmac/Landon Mackenzie/Xinlian Xu Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username Jmacmac


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Draft:Jmacmac/Landon Mackenzie


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Hi Jmacmac

Your article is neutral and well-organized with sufficient resources. I found some lines are unnecessarily bold. For example, the whole Early Life and Education section is bold.

Here is two images maybe useful, I found on https://search.creativecommons.org/photos/80a4e591-9944-4d40-95c2-02e8b45b4175

Sur la piste d'Athabasca : se rendre de l'autre côté (Terre des petits bâtons), 1999, Landon Mackenzie

Landon Mackenzie, Emily Carr Faculty