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Article Evaluation: Hail Mary Pass

The articles information was relevant and had good description of history and everything throughout, but it could've been more organized in my opinion. Also there needs to be information added to the article, because it lists the major hail-mary passes throughout history of football but it is missing Aaron Rodgers clutch game winning or game saving hail-marys that he has thrown throughout the past couple of years. Also the Minnesota Miracle from last seasons NFL playoffs needs to be added to this list as well because it was one of the most well known plays. Not much more needs to be added frankly, it is a short yet effective article describing what the pass is and what it achieves throughout the game of football.

The article seems to be neutral. While there seems to be some bias in the talk section, the article itself is not biased. This is mostly because it just needs to state facts about the game and what exactly the pass achieves. They give a long lists of all the hail-mary passes that have been completed throughout the history, not highlighting just one team or one specific moment in order to portray the whole type of pass.

The links in the article to cite its sources do work and go to what they describe in the article. They all back what is being proven and are not biased themselves either. Each fact, player or significant moment are all cited reliably and have correct sources to back them as well.

In the talk page it mostly the authors talking about first hand experiences of them going to football games themselves and describing their understanding and love for the game together. As well as this they let one another know what they are going to edit and their opinions on what people have added to the article as well. It is rated as a C-Class article and was given a mid-importance status on Wikipedia. Along with this it is a part of the WikiProject American Football. This article differs from the way we talk in class because there is not a lot of conflicting sides to the story, rather it is more set in stone facts of how the pass came along in the game of football. In a way there is a point where you could say sides conflict and that is where they discuss where exactly the pass started, but it is not much of a conflicting arguement or of much importance.

Article Selections:

Juvenile Delinquency:

- Has credible sources linked for each claim.

-It is written neutrally, states facts and presents both possible sides to said argument.

-Credible sources

- Content is relevant, but could have more information added to some of the paragraphs.

Person In Need of Supervision:

-Has credible sources for each claim

-Very simple topic with relevant information, but could have more information added to it because it is only two paragraphs long.

-Yes it is written neutrally.

-Citations are reliable and credible, but there is only one article that is cited.

Young Offender:

-Credible sources linked to each claim

-Written neutrally, but only gives examples from United Kingdom Geographical area countries, which could make the information a bit biased because it is solely for that geographical region.

-The topic is written with relevant information, but could benefit from additional information about other countries in order to broaden the information.

-Citations are reliable, vast, and credible.

United States : (Added this to an article)
In the United States, the age of criminal responsibility for federal crimes is set at 11. While this has been set at the federal level, each state is responsible for setting their own age of criminal responsibility. 33 of The United States have no minimum age for criminal responsibility, leaving there to be 17 states that do. North Carolina has the lowest responsibility age of 7 years old and Wisconsin has the highest of 10 years old.

There are 1.5 million cases per year in The United States that handle status offenses or criminal offenses by young offenders. Although this is a big number of juveniles, it is found that there was only 52 juveniles fully sentenced to prison-time throughout the five year span between 2010-2015. Although there are only 52 offenders committed to full incarceration, recidivism is common among young offenders, with 67% of them repeating a crime and being brought back into the system.

Brazil
In Brazil, the age of criminal responsibility was originally set at the age of 18. Anyone that was found guilty of committing crimes prior to the age of 18 were solely given an infraction and given other options rather than jail. These included, for children under 12, foster care options in order get them a safer family and for young offenders over 12 a class that they had to attend in order to help rehabilitate them. But with violent crime rates raising almost 40% among the young offenders, there has been a successful push to make the new age of criminal responsibility in the nation of Brazil reduced to the age of 16.