User:Jmane014/Pricho8o/Femininity/Jmane014 Peer Review

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Prich080


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This Wikipedia explains femininity, and expands of the history of what it means to be feminine, what is considered feminine, and the social construction of it all. Great read! I suggest re-structuring your first sentence to add clarity and simplicity.

Also, do you mean "wave" instead of "vague"

Instead of: "Nowadays due to the fifth vague of feminism and different trends we observe a shift in what is considered feminine."

Option: "The fifth wave of feminism and the observations of diverse trends has shifted what is considered feminine."