User:Jmann126/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Telepharmacy


 * Article Evaluation
 * The topics mentioned in the article are relevant to the overall topic, the claims are all neutral and have reliable sources backing them up. However, the article doesn't represent underrepresented groups such as second and third world countries; it only includes detailed information on telepharmacy in Canada, United States, and Australia, and briefly mentioned a few other countries. There could also be more examples of telepharmacy and the article could go more in depth, therefore the need for more credible sources is also needed.


 * Sources
 * Telehealth Models for Increasing Access to Pharmacy Services
 * https://www.ruralhealthinfo.org/toolkits/telehealth/2/care-delivery/pharmacy-services

Option 2

 * Article title
 * History of Mental Disorders


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article is neutral, goes in depth, has a lot of examples of how mental disorders were perceived in the past, especially those of underrepresented countries. There are also plentiful citations, which are also credible. The talk page also suggests lots of edits, all of which have been resolved. This article is very well organized and easy to follow as well.


 * Sources
 * The stigma of mental disorders
 * https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC5007563/

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Sleep Efficiency


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article does have a neutral standpoint and the content currently in the article is relevant to sleep efficiency. Each claim has a citation, however the citations need to be better and have more reliability, especially source 2. The article also doesn't mention underrepresented groups, which may include insight on the topic. The article needs a lot more information, meaning it also needs a lot more reliable sources, and it also needs to be organized better in order for readers to understand the topic better. It would also be really helpful to include examples from studies or history that show the importance of sleep efficiency. The language in the article also makes the writer seem unsure about the results of research done in the past on sleep efficiency, using words such as "apparently" when discussing results. The writer also tends to use passive voice instead of active voice throughout the article and includes results of research that directly contradict the previous statement.


 * Sources
 * The Impact of Media Use on Adolescent Sleep Efficiency
 * https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC4691399/

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