User:Jmcintyre21/WCUR/Kjts101 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jmcintyre21


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jmcintyre21/WCUR?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * WCUR

Evaluate the drafted changes
There was some good information added, especially in terms of training. However, it feels a little personal. You can be more direct with the information. PSA needs to be capitalized or just written out as public service announcement.