User:Jmedi091/Evolution of human intelligence/MRawlings73 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Jmedi091)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jmedi091/Evolution of human intelligence


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Evolution of human intelligence - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
-- Content: The content is relevant to the article, current, and fresh. All information provided fits into the section to be edited.

-- Tone & Balance: Tone of added content is neutral and without bias one way or the other. The wording is balanced, easy to understand, and makes relevant points on the topic of the evolution of human intelligence.

-- Sources & References: Source material is good and links work. Date Relevance should be edited for Nowzari, Hessam; Jorgensen, Michael (2022-06). "Human Dento-Facial Evolution: Cranial Capacity, Facial Expression, Language, Oral Complications and Diseases". Oral. 2 (2): 163–172. doi:10.3390/oral2020016. ISSN 2673-6373. Otherwise everything looks great.

-- Organization: Well organized and follows an easy to read and understand outline. Grammar is excellent and is broken down in sections that touch on the major points.

-- Overall Impressions: The current additions will enhance the overall article well. Improvements to the current article itself would be beneficial in both the "Models" and "Nutrition" sections. Further content would balance these two sections greatly.