User:Jmedi091/Evolution of human intelligence/Rdano001 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jmedi091


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jmedi091/Evolution_of_human_intelligence?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Evolution of human intelligence

Evaluate the drafted changes
Peer Review:

- The additional information to the homo section flows well and is written neutrally and encyclopedically and is well cited.

- I think it would be important to tie back these morphological changes to the focus of the article

- suggestions for other sections to improve or edit: - The information under the "Models" section is not a neutral as it could be and could be rephrased to better fit Wikipedia's standards

- Overall your edit looks great and I think it is a great start.