User:Jmjohnson43/Federal Election Campaign Act/WIKI20220 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jmjohnson43


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jmjohnson43/Federal Election Campaign Act


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Federal Election Campaign Act

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The lead appears to be well put together, however I would suggest adding a little more substance to it. It seems to be almost similar to the current lead that is shown to the original wikipedia page. Possibly rewording in your own words, along with proper citation would be beneficial for your lead.

Historical Background

The historical background part does not appear to be existent. I would suggest include a section on the historical background, which would explain how the legislation was enacted throughout time.

Legislative History

This section appears to be great since it provides specifics about the provisions and accurately cites them. This section would benefit from including information such as when the legislation was introduced and who introduced it. I recommend including some details about the committee's development to indicate what the committee's perspectives were on this legislation. I would recommend including the provisions in the legislative history, along with the bill's introduction date and committee progress all under this section.

The information you have accumulated seems to structure your article correctly. I would suggest adding a bit more information to the lead, such as writing it yourself, since it appears fairly similar to the original wikipedia page, and a few additional sources to improve your article.