User:Jmk12/Copy editing/G.O Memo Peer Review

General info
(provide username)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * 1) I appreciate that you go into what copy writers do and do not do.And what they.
 * 2) Overall there aren't to many problems with the page, This seems very balanced in terms of bias, as in there is none.
 * 3) The last part of the article though feels opinionated and argumentative. It states a prediciton about the upcoming years in a way that presents only one side of the issue of copy editing weather it wili die off or not.