User:Jmlslleon/Mound Builders/Hkolyvek Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

jmlslleon


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jmlslleon/Mound_Builders?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mound Builders

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, your work is looking really good. Everything in your draft is relevant to the article, and it doesn't seem to be biased. The only comments that I really have is that I think it would be helpful to explain more about Joseph Smith. He's mentioned in the article and in your draft, but I'm still confused on what exactly it is that he did and what hoax he perpetuated. I think all that needs is some minor clarifying. The other comment I have is about your sources, I don't see a link to your first source. I googled just the citation itself and I think it's on a database, which looks pretty good. I may be wrong but it seems like both of your sources are published by the Church of Latter Day Saints, so it might be beneficial to add a source that isn't coming from them but rather an outside source looking in. Otherwise, I think you're in really good shape!