User:Jmorales96/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Mind–body dualism
 * Article Evaluation
 * This article has a well written lead section that briefly goes over what dualism is without sounding persuasive. The content is up to date with the last known edit on March 9 2021. This article also has a lot of conversation going on behind the scene, with the last edit being made on citations. This article has potential to be worked on, and it is noted that this article was part of Good articles/Philosophy and religion, but was taken off for reassessment. There is a large amount of content, with many working on the article, and possibly holds a lot of notability. The organization is well written, and gives reference to origin, history, core beliefs, and concepts. Overall this article is not complete, because there are changes that can be made to make it better.
 * Sources
 * https://www.britannica.com/topic/mind-body-dualism
 * https://iep.utm.edu/descmind/
 * https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AMTMtWHclKo
 * https://www.qcc.cuny.edu/socialsciences/ppecorino/intro_text/Chapter%206%20Mind-Body/DUALISM.htm
 * https://plato.stanford.edu/entries/dualism/
 * https://plato.stanford.edu/entries/dualism/

Option 2

 * Psilocybin therapy
 * Article Evaluation
 * This article has a very simple, concise, explanation of what psilocybin is used for in therapy. The article goes over its history, how it was used, how it is being used now, and explains what has changed. Briefly goes over the "red tape", so to speak, about why there is not much research available on the subject. It was last edited in January 2021, which leads me to believe it is up to date, however, the content is lacking. This is a fairly brief article, and I believe there is new research surrounding psilocybin use on PTSD patients, which is not mentioned in the article. There is no talking within the article, but this article is part of two groups, WikiProject Medicine and WikiProject Psychology. This article can be worked on, and is somewhat complete, but I would like to add the information regarding the PTSD research.
 * Sources
 * https://pdxscholar.library.pdx.edu/studentsymposium/2019/Posters/14/
 * https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/abs/pii/S2215036615005763
 * https://www.cambridge.org/core/journals/the-british-journal-of-psychiatry/article/implications-for-psychedelicassisted-psychotherapy-functional-magnetic-resonance-imaging-study-with-psilocybin/65960EEBE9984AF5CD24F4E42449FACC
 * https://www.ingentaconnect.com/content/ben/cdar/2014/00000007/00000003/art00005#Refs
 * https://maps.org/research-archive/cluster/psilo-lsd/pca1protocol.pdf
 * https://maps.org/research-archive/cluster/psilo-lsd/pca1protocol.pdf

Option 3

 * Fiber-optic communication
 * Article Evaluation
 * The article is non biased, gives a brief explanation of what fiber-optic communication is, and then explains the history of it. The page does recommend that there needs additional citations, and the talk within the article is filled with individuals pulling out areas that need to be worked on or removed from different parts of the article. There is a lot of information, with explanations of its uses, its origins, and the technology that goes behind it. This article is also in interest with the following projects: WikiProject Telecommunications, WikiProject Computing, and WikiProject Technology. This article does need to have some work done, and the references in the conversation amongst those in the talk section of the article can provide a guided area of what needs to be edited.
 * Sources
 * https://www.attinternetservice.com/resources/fiber-vs-dsl/
 * https://www.nai-group.com/optical-fiber-technology-how-it-works/#:~:text=Fiber%20optics%2C%20or%20optical%20fibers,in%20bundles%20called%20optical%20cables.&text=So%2C%20the%20optical%20fiber%20transmits,signal%20is%20decoded%20as%20data.
 * https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC3146387/#:~:text=Charles%20Kuen%20Kao%20is%20known,communication%20in%20the%20Information%20Age.
 * https://www.rs-online.com/designspark/9-uses-of-fiber-optic-cables
 * https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC3146387/#:~:text=Charles%20Kuen%20Kao%20is%20known,communication%20in%20the%20Information%20Age.
 * https://www.rs-online.com/designspark/9-uses-of-fiber-optic-cables

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