User:Jmr0416/Maned sloth/Jasleend Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jmr0416


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jmr0416/Maned_sloth?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Maned sloth

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: The lead very clearly reflects the topic of the article, but there could be more information added to it. This information could lead into the next sections of the article or even more general information such as the biology of the maned sloth or its conservation level could be added.

Content: The content of the article is very well written and detailed. The section of anatomy and morphology provides a well description of the sloth and its physical attributes. Your plan for the article body about conservation is looking good! Providing more information about the effects of the destruction of habitat and deforestation will help to understand why the sloth is under the Vulnerable category. The content about conservation right now is very broad and generalized, so after you make your edits, it will provide much more detail and current up to date news about the maned sloth conservation effort. The content overall is very related to the topic and provides good information about the species.

Tone and Balance: The content is very neutral to the article and does not include bias. The added content does not attempt to persuade the reader in a certain way.

Sources and References: New content is backed up by a reliable source. They are very thorough and provide lots of information about the maned sloth. Your link worked and took me directly to the source. You chose a really well and detailed source. It'll give you lots of information!

Organization: Your outline is very well organized and clear to understand the main points that you plan to write about. The article is overall well organized into sections that highlight different aspects of the species. I really like that it has a different section for ecology and behavior.

Images and Media: The articles contains images that add to the understanding of the article. They are well captioned and adhere to Wikipedia's copyright rules. I like that a map is provided to show the range of the maned sloths.

Overall Impression: Your outline is looking good and the information added is and will make the article so much better! It will make the article more complete, especially by adding more up to date information. You should definitely add to the lead as well since it is very short. Other than that, keep up the good work!