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Kenyan Elections of 2017
Sentences in beginning regarding dates of new election could be merged

Background
Second sentence does not seemed intially linked to article

More background on Obama? Why would he ask for calm?

Masando Murder
More details on Rono?

By county
Chart is blank

Reaction
Why is it important who Kenyatta invited? List seems too long

Tone
Seems mostly neutral, POV and evidence from both sides

Talk
Basically empty