User:Jmurdock6/Edwin Locke/Mhitt02 Peer Review

General info
jmurdock6
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jmurdock6/Edwin_Locke?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Edwin Locke

Evaluate the drafted changes
The initial article is clear and concise in the lead. The lead provided enough background to give a broad overview of who Edwin Locke is before going into a deeper dive into the article I have a basic understand of who he is. I like that there are titles and subtitles to help break up his work such as the theories portion of the article. If possible, I think adding links to the books that Edwin Locke might help add credibility to the article. The links for the awards work. All the links in the references work.