User:Jnelso95/Mather Tower/Droth7 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jnelso95


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Mather Tower


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mather Tower

Evaluate the drafted changes
Pros-

Great Improvement to the page organization. It made the page seem like it was well organized.

I like how you added about the buildings failures early on with the terra cotta and what was learned from those time because that is a big part of any building.

This seems like a very professional writing that used no tone and was a report.

The media you added was a great visual of the Neo-Gothic style

Cons-There was a lot of explaining on what Terra cotta is but it could be on its own page with a shorter synopsis on what is the most important thing about it.