User:Jnnynguyen/So Much Blue/Ecday2 Peer Review

General info
Jnnynguyen
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=So_Much_Blue&diff=1187655196&oldid=1155809412
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * So Much Blue
 * So Much Blue

Evaluate the drafted changes
- Lead

Looks great! Nice job summarizing the main points of the book, and it leads into the rest of the article very well. Make sure your addition about the reception has a source, though.

- Summary

You did a great job adding to this! All of your grammar choices seem good, and I agree with you on changing “Pace” to “Kevin.”

- Characters

This list looks very good. The character descriptions are not too long and explain each person well. Really impressive!

- Reception

I think it would be great to add a “Reception” section. The reception of the book was mentioned in the lead, so it would fit well into the article. If you have sources on the topic it would be good to elaborate on what you said in the lead. (I have scrolled further down and now see you have added a bit to the Reception section, but I still think you could elaborate a bit more, and make sure to add those sources from that section to the lead)