User:Jnolan27/Stony Point, New York/WutUpJut Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jnolan27


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jnolan27/Stony_Point%2C_New_York?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Stony Point, New York

Evaluation[edit]
Lead - I think the current lead of this article provides a good amount of insight into Stony Point, New York. I think it would be a good idea to add mention of the Battle of Stony Point as this is now being highlighted in the article.

Content - I like the way that you have incorporated details of the battle, such as the weapons used and their impacts. From the content you have provided, I believe I have a good idea of some key details regarding the Battle of Stony Point. One thing I am curious of is if there were any controversies of this battle and if this information could be included.

Tone and Balance - The details you have provided feel extremely balanced in that it is similar to how a social studies textbook would read. I sense no direct bias or admiration for the event and am given the room to digesting the information in my own perception.

Sources and References - Sources and references seem to be in good order, from reputable sources, and cited properly.

Organization - Each piece of content is appropriately labeled and kept within its own section. If I were to go to your article looking for a specific piece of information, I believe I would be able to find the information I am looking for quite quickly and easy.

Overall Impressions - Really enjoyed reading your article and the contributions you have made! The level of clarity and balance that you have in your article made it a pleasure to read, and I believe would be a substantial benefit to the article publicly on Wikipedia! Looking forward to seeing how you continue to develop it and cannot wait to see it launch live.