User:Jnsellers/Dopamine hypothesis of schizophrenia/Jaycar71 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jnsellers


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jnsellers/Dopamine_hypothesis_of_schizophrenia?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Dopamine hypothesis of schizophrenia

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Very interesting article that you have selected. I also like you current contributions. With this sentence, "This can be seen in the striatum and amygdala, both of which are areas in the brain that process aversive stimuli," I almost got a little confused as to what you were referring to and I had to reread the sentence prior to this. I might would add a little more information to it clarifying what can be seen in these particular brain areas. It might have been unclear to me from the switch talking about the study you cited, to what area in the brain this can be recognized in. Overall, good contributions. I enjoyed reading it.