User:Jnsellers/Dopamine hypothesis of schizophrenia/SomaYukihira21X Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jnsellers


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Dopamine hypothesis of schizophrenia - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Great addition to genetic evidence since the author did not post much information about it. Definitely is written in your own unique style. I would have liked for you to expand upon "Abnormal NMDAR transmission may alter communication between cortical regions and the striatum." part of your draft. Would make it more informative. I would put the original text before the remakes/additions to make it easier to follow your edits. Lastly, it might be good to add more to the criticism part of the article for more opposing viewpoints. Good job!