User:Jnuhanovich2/Religious segregation/Zapn7 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jhhanovich2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Religious segregation
 * Religious segregation

Evaluate the drafted changes
This is a review of the live article.

Lead
The lead does not include a brief description on the article's main sections, but that might be okay since the main sections are all countries where religious segregation has occurred.

Content
Some of the countries such as Myanmar, Northern Ireland, and Pakistan have considerably larger sections. And some sections like, Bahrain, have little to no content at all. Most sections include links to related articles, but even still It's good to have a brief description so readers will know why the country is on this list.

Sources and References
The current citation list seems robust and includes book, articles, and journals. There are two red links that should be explained in the article itself instead of linking to a nonexistent article.

Overall
I think that with a handful of good references and additional content, and some editing and reorganization, this article could be improved to reflect a higher standard.