User:JoJo-74r68h/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
(Provide a link to the article here.)

Turbo Kid

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

I choose this article because I seen the movie. By chance it happened to be a C ranking with not much development and edits.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

Lead Section:


 * Some of the information in the lead could be condensed further to eliminate unnecessary/ redundant information

Content:


 * Content is relevant but all sub sections can be added upon
 * The plot is missing some of the side characters
 * Some description of characters are too vague
 * Some areas could use more accurate descriptions during specific plot points
 * Links can also be added to the sequel as well as actors
 * A section can be added for its use of  80’s and 90s references

Tone and Balance:


 * Some statements through the article can be mistaken for personal interpretation in both the landing page and overall content
 * The “See Also” section seems like it can be cut and or revised because links appear irrelevant

Source and References:


 * Sources and references are functional but more references could be linked in within the plot section

Organization and Writing Quality:


 * Organization is good but writing could be a bit better.  Certain parts can be condensed and areas could be expanded upon.  Same goes for wording.
 * Sections could be broken further.

Talk Page:


 * Non existent
 * Wikipedia rates this article with a C and to be on the low importance scale.

Overall thoughts:

A decent summary of the movie, tone is mostly impartial with the exception of certain parts, material could probably go much further in a variety of ways while other parts could be condensed. Regardless of Wikipedia’s low rating and potential additions, overall development will heavily depend on how much public information exists on this obscure movie.