User:Joanet23/Deafness in Francophone Canada/Kjb1818 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Joanet23


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Joanet23/Deafness_in_Francophone_Canada?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead: good, informative, and sources to go alone with points.

Content: language deprivation section has a few points without citations. Besides this, all points are cited and the article is easy to follow and is backed up with supporting information. The separation of different points within each section makes it easy to follow along and understand the information.

Sources: all seem reliable and are easily accessible. Some points are missing citations.

Overall, the article is well written and is very informative. Besides the missing citations, everything looks good.