User:Jocedye/Endocrine disruptor/Lsmoses Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) JayRel23


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JayRel23/Darryl_B._Hood?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, I think this is a great start. I would suggest, as you continue building, to include hyperlinks to words that need more explaining. These hyperlinks should give more context about his work and what the ARCH program is. I also think that it would be beneficial to maybe go into more detail about what the "Multigenerational Effects of Inhaled B(a)P on Development" has brought into the scientific community and why it is a big accomplishment for him. I look forward to reading more about Darryl B. Hood soon!