User:Jocedye/Endocrine disruptor/Mnaddo Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jocedye


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jocedye/Endocrine disruptor
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Endocrine disruptor

Evaluate the drafted changes
The current page is well structured, and the flow of thought and information is coherent. The environment and human body clean-up section require citations to some statements to improve it. Also, adding information on new scientific innovations that aid in environmental clean-up (e.g., bioagents like horseradish peroxidase use in BPA removal) could help improve it. Below is a research paper that you can cite that covers some of these innovations (Okugbe EO, Zhang Songhe. (2019). Endocrine disrupting effects of bisphenol A exposure and recent advances on its removal by water treatment systems. A Review.  doi: 10.1016/j.sciaf.2019.e00135 )