User:Jocelyn2019/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Human fertilization

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I have chosen to evaluate this article because I have always been interested in fertilization, specifically in humans and how it works. Understanding the way in which an egg and sperm merge to become a zygote, when you are most fertile to conceive, etc., are questions any novice human being has when looking to get impregnated. It is very important to understand the different pathways where fertilization can go all wrong or right. Being knowledgeable in this topic gives awareness to what occurs in the process of fertilizing. After reading this article, my first impression was that the article does a good job in going over all aspects of fertilization and does so by making it clear to comprehend without any confusion.

Evaluate the article

 * The Lead section does a great job in giving a sneak peak of the article. It begins with a clear definition of human fertilization and proceeds in how fertilization works.
 * The content available in the article actively covers the different parts human fertilization reflects on, although there are some sections that need some more work on.
 * A couple sections that need work on is Cell membranes and Diseases. These sections are very short and there is room for expansion under this topic.
 * The article holds a neutral standpoint with no room of bias input and/or room towards persuasion on a given topic. Simply informs the reader in being knowledgeable on the topic.
 * The references section offers a numerous amount of sources although some sources can be of a more present date. There are also some sources that come off of a website and this can be switched to a peer reviewed publication instead by doing more research. All sources are properly added onto the text and are accessible with a click.
 * The article is readily easy to understand and has a good structure to it by starting with some history, followed with the anatomy and fusion, age and time in which you are most fertile, and ending with diseases.
 * The images added into this article give a better visual to the information being expressed to people who are visual learners. The captions added to the picture give a brief explanation of what the image covers. The images follow the "free license" regulation in that all the images are of one's own work and all have credited the author.


 * The article has been given a C-Class rating and is part of Anatomy, Physiology, and Anthropology WikiProjects. The kinds of conversations going on in the "talk room" are how some sections need to be better detailed, having a better resource and questions of people asking for a more specific of timeframe in the different occurrences.
 * The articles strengths are in delivering clear information on every subsection. I do believe there are areas for improvement in some of sections where information can be added to fully grasp the understanding and meaning. The addition of information with reliable sources, will lead to a more well-developed article.