User:Jocfitzgerald/Glaistig/ZyrettiSpaghetti Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jocfitzgerald


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jocfitzgerald/Glaistig?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Glaistig

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I definitely posted this in the wrong place I think, but this is definitely a fun article that I've enjoyed reading so far. There are just a couple spots where punctuation can be cleared up. "In other, more benign incarnations, the glaistig is a type of tutelary spirit and protector of cattle and herders, and in at least one legend in Scotland," could be changed to get rid of "other" and the comma, along with starting a new sentence at "and in at least one legend in Scotland". The first reference isn't pulling up for me, so that's probably something you should check out. I'm having a hard time figuring out where the third reference is in the link, so if you could add a page number, there wouldn't be any confusion or having to read through the entire thing. The article so far seems neutral, and I think everything mentioned in the page is relevant to the article. I would definitely like to know more, so if there is anything else to expand on, I think it would be worth adding into this article. Good luck!