User:Joe.harkins.richmond/Qasr al-Kharana/Charlottemeans Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Joe Harkins (Joe.harkins.richmond)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Qasr Kharana
 * Qasr Kharana

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Hey Joe, your contributions to the article look strong and you did a good job of making sure that the contributions improved the entire article. I really liked how you chose to expand on the purpose section of the article since it looked like it needed work, and it is such an important part of the article. I saw that you also made some minor edits for grammar and restricting sentences to make them stronger and make the information flow better, which I also think really helps strengthen the article. Sometimes it seemed like you could have used a bit more of a neutral tone, but your contributions as a whole remained mostly neutral. All of your sources looked reputable and strong, and the links all work. Overall good job!)