User:Joe.harkins.richmond/Qasr al-Kharana/Lucymcginnis Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Joe.harkins.richmond)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Joe.harkins.richmond/Qasr_al-Kharana?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Qasr Kharana

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article starts with a strong introduction with general facts about Qasr Kharana. (history, location, architectural influences) However, there is a lack of citations in the introduction that should be added. In the "description" part of the article, small grammatical edits must be made but the sources the writer is using look non biased and reliable. In the "location" section of the article, the information is useful but some of the terms should be linked with more information in order to help the reader understand the section more. Also, some of the sentences in this section need citations. The "date" section is straightforward but citations are needed. The "purpose" section of the article is also missing citations but the information is straightforward and neutral. The "Building style, layout, techniques" section has a lot of information but needs citations after some sentences unless the citation at the end of the paragraph accounts for the paragraph as a whole. This section also needs grammatical editing as some of the sentences do not particularly make sense. The "History" section is also very informational and neutral but has the same problem with citations at the end of each paragraph. The "Location and Tourism" section is also informational but lacks some information of current tourism. Is it a popular site to visit? This section is also missing citations. Overall, this article is informative and non bias but it needs to be checked over for grammar errors and citations must be added to some of the paragraphs.