User:JoePayne6467/Sunday Night Sex Show/SophL09 Peer Review

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JoePayne6467
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Evaluate the drafted changes
I really enjoyed what you have so far.

- I do think that there is a lot more that can be added. However, I'm sure this is a working article.

- In regards to your references I think you can use some more just to further develop your article.

- Your introducing paragraph is great, I really like that you add various embedded links; keep doing that throughout your article.

- Going forward I think you could highlight one of the most known, spoken, or notorious episodes from the show to further develop your article.

- Overall, good job I think your article could use some more depth but other than that really well organization and again the use of the embedded links really helps.