User:JoePayne6467/Women on Waves/Robynbest Peer Review

General info
JoePayne6467
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JoePayne6467/Women_on_Waves?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Women on Waves

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * I really like how you put what the organization is about in its own section, instead of putting it in the overview like in the original article
 * I also like how even though you have some of the same information from the original, you've made it your own instead of just repeating what was originally said
 * One of your links appears to be to a section where you need to log into the Carleton library, so try to see if that resource is available to link where non-Carleton people could access it